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帖子 由 波波饼 2011-08-03, 21:45

与图画写作相比,图表写作的内容更为直观简洁,一目了然。写作中考生需要具备对各种数据、差异、前后变化、因果关系等细节的准确归纳、把握能力和文字表达能力。下面以一试题为例,对图表写作的要点及步骤做一简要分析。
Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on the Increase in the Number of Chinese Traveling Abroad.
Study the following chart carefully and base your composition on the information given in the chart.
(1) State the changes in the number of Chinese traveling abroad in the past three years.
(2) Give possible reasons for the changes.
(不知如何粘贴图表,图略)
1. 写作思路
这一图表清楚表明1991~2001年全国出境旅游人数的增长情况。首先应当注意各数据所代表的含义,然后说明这3年间全国出境旅游人数的情况,解释造成这种变化的原因。图表作文一般也可以分为3段来写。一般来说,首段说明数据变化情况,着重说明图表中各类数字所代表的含义,后面两段发掘其内涵,分析解释原因,最后做出结论。根据图表及写作指令,我们可以列出写作提纲。
2. 写作提纲
(1) the changes in the number 数据变化情况
The trend of Chinese traveling abroad is going up these years.
In the past three years the number was on a steady rise.
The number increased from 7.5 million in 1999 to 10 in 2000to 12.1 million in 2001.
(2) Give possible reasons for the changes 给出可能的原因
There are at least three reasons.
First and foremost, the income of Chinese.
What’s more, the development of the travel industry in China.
Last but no the least, our policy of opening up to the outside world.
(3) Conclusion 结论
It is of great concern of our life.
The improvement of our living standards.
The development of our economy.
将上述提纲整理,修改,加上必要的衔接连贯,便可以形成下面这篇作文。
The Increase in the Number of Chinese Traveling Abroad
As can be clearly observed from the chart above, the trend of Chinese traveling abroad is going up these years. In the past three years, the number of Chinese traveling abroad was on a steady rise. According to the chart, the number increased from 7.5 million in 1999 to 10 in 2000 and to 12.1 million in 2001.
I assume there are at least three reasons to account for the above mentioned changes. First and foremost, the changes are primarily concerned with the income of Chinese. They are better off and can afford to travel abroad. What’s more, they have a lot to do with the development of the travel industry in China. Travel agencies in mounting numbers are attracting more people to join in their tours abroad. Last but no the least, the changes are closely related to our policy of opening up to the outside world.
From what has been discussed so far, it is obvious that the increase in the number of Chinese traveling abroad is of great concern of our life. It reflects the improvement of our living standards and the development of our economy.(190 words)

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